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FIC: Agger/Finnan - Premeditation  
05:15pm 07/04/2007
 
 
I can wait forever
Title: Premeditation
Pairing: Daniel Agger / Steven Finnan, light Xabier Alonso Olano / Steven Gerrard
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: If only it were true but it's not.
Summary: "And Finnan realised that the lad's eyes had flecks of pale brown in them, flecks that almost matched the freckles on his face."

Author's Note: I am in the midst of writing Duck Drabbles. And then I got distracted by MSN and paularinaa and hoppipolla. They're both evil. So this is for them.

There are mistakes I'm sure. Written in one sitting while chatting with children of evil.



Finnan couldn't quite recall the very first time he met Danny. Bit and pieces maybe. Rafa and Stevie had introduced him as they did all new players. The lad had gone around, shook hands, said all the right things, said just enough. A good grip. An easy smile. Confident. Young. Very tall. Eyes that crinkled when he smiled.

The next day at training it was the tattoos that caught everyone's attention. Riise and Pennant were immediately drawn to the lad, grabbing his arm and poking his sides, then turning him this way and that. Agger had looked a little embarrassed at first, and then utterly bewildered when Luis appeared and started chattering in rapid fire Spanish before remembering that not everyone spoke Spanish. Not even at Liverpool.

Stevie and Alonso had smiled, with the captain tugging up the Spaniard's shirt, laughing and saying something about how 'You'll Never Walk Alone' in Basque would look good, just...there. And Alonso had grinned, and had said something too low for anyone else to hear. And Gerrard's face had turned red, and he muttered something about how it was time for everyone to shower and stalked away. Forehead all a-furrowed.

And Carra.

Carra had caught Finnan's glance and arched an eyebrow, mouthing 'kids' before rolling his eyes. And Finnan couldn't quite stop the laugh that emerged. And Danny had turned to look, then immediately ducked his head when he met Finnan's stare. And Finnan realised that the lad's eyes had flecks of pale brown in them, flecks that almost matched the freckles on his face.

It wasn't long before the team adopted the boy as one of their own. Carra began to thump Agger on his back after training, after matches, and then during matches. The first few times it happened Danny had pitched forward violently, startled, eyes wide open in shock. But soon after, the tall Dane braced himself even before Carra made contact. Planting his feet just so, shoulders bracing for impact. Carra had laughed uproariously. And thumped even harder thereafter. A patented sign of approval.

Rafa had beamed in his understated way. Pako's grin couldn't have been wider.

And Sami. Sami had smiled. Quiet, composed, his expression giving nothing away. But the fading blue of his eyes hinted he knew what was to come. Still, he made the time to speak to the younger defender after each training session; and then later, before every match the older man didn't start. It became a familiar sight, the two tall men huddled together with Agger listening in rapt attention and nodding as the older man gestured and spoke rapidly. And then Sami would give the kid a pat on the back and make his way to the bench to watch. And Danny would smile slightly and walk away, never looking back.

And oddly, Alonso and Agger had hit it off immediately. It was a strange sight at first, two heads, one light, one dark, bent, engrossed over home and decor magazines that one or the other had brought. But soon Xabi and the young Dane would arrange to meet so that the Spaniard could show the lad the best places to find the best fresh fruit. Or the stores where one could find the sturdiest floor tiles for the most competitive prices. Stevie had kept a watchful eye for a while but gave up soon after. At least he didn't have to be dragged to that god forsaken little fruit shop at the end of the world for mangoes any longer.

And Luis was Luis. And most of the time, to Finns at least, Danny had no clue what the smaller man was going on about. But the young Dane would laugh anyways. And Luis would laugh as well. And soon Dan was saying 'Si, Si' almost as often as the Spaniards on the team. And Luis would giggle and say that this was the first time he had heard anyone say 'Si' with a Danish accent. And Danny would try to teach Luis how to say ‘Yes’ and ‘No’ in Danish. And Luis would ask why all Scandinavian languages sounded like everyone spoke with a phlegm-congested chest. And Riise would break in to argue the issue, and Kyut would join in, and none of them would be able to stop the bouts of almost hysterical laughter and jostling that followed.

And Finnan would watch. And Finnan would smile. And Finnan would never quite say anything. Not even when his eyes and Danny’s would meet. And Danny would grin, damp hair sticking up every which way, half plastered to his head. And Finnan would shake his head and turn away. Still smiling.

But Finnan noticed many things.

He noticed how sometimes after a match, Danny would still wrap his hand around his once injured wrist and rotate it slowly. A habit the boy had not yet broken after having to nurse the injury for so long.

He noticed how standing in the tunnel before a match, Danny could never quite keep still, standing on the balls of his feet, chewing at his lower lip, cracking his knuckles, stretching out his neck. Watching everything and everyone around him, silent, his breathing carefully controlled.

He noticed how the boy never quite knew how to react when the little mascot would hold out his or her hand for the defender to grasp, hero worship clear in their large bright eyes. A 5-year-old girl had reached up to hug him once, and Danny had froze, and Xabi had to shove him lightly before the young Dane doubled-over to hug the little girl back. She wouldn’t let go, and Danny ended up lifting her in his arms, her tiny face flushed with excitement, and carried her onto the pitch. He sought her out later it seems, after the match, and Finnan found out from Luis that a red “Agger 5” shirt with a scrawled “D. Agger” now hangs framed from above her bed.

And Finnan noticed how Danny never seemed to have enough hands, at least not when he was off the pitch. He was constantly holding a magazine or book in one, his fingers keeping his page. His keys would be in the other hand, poised to open some lock to a car or a locker or a door somewhere. His cell phone would be wedged between his ear and shoulder and there would always be a pen stuck in the side of his mouth, shifting about spasmodically as he spoke in rapid Danish to whoever was on the other end of the line.

And once, when he spotted Finnan, he mumbled out a yell to the older man, asking for help to write something down as he continued to walk briskly to wherever it was he was heading. And Finnan had to double back and speed up to keep pace. And then found himself glaring suspiciously at the semi-damp pen that had mysteriously ended up in his hand.

'Why can't you write it?'

'I will lose my page. Come on Finns, just write it on my arm. Here is ok-'

'What? Your arm? Just put your keys in your pocket-'

'Er I have no pockets. And I need the keys soon. Come on Finns-'

'Then just give your keys to me. I’ll go with you-'

'No no. Can you just write what I say-'

'But I don't understand Danish!'

'Just- Just write what it sounds like. Just- Please?'


And so Finns wrote down the sounds the lad had repeated. And Danny continued to hold on to his magazine and open his car door and pack his backpack. All at once.

And then later,


'Er what- What's this?'

'It's...eh. That’s…er...It's what you said.'

'What the hell is randen, no...run? Run...runden..krup? Rundenkrup?'

'How the hell would I know. You said it!'

'I didn't say- What language is this?'

'You said it!'

'Er no I did not.'

'Well...that's what it sounded like. I told you I didn’t speak Danish!’

‘Er but this is not Danish.’

‘For the love of-‘


And Danny had continued to complain. And Finnan had continued to defend himself. And the argument had continued over dinner, and then dessert, and then coffee, and then under tossed bedclothes and sweaty sheets and mumbled names, and gasps and moans, and bruised hip bones and scratched up shoulder blades, and damp, swollen mouths.

And later, much later, Finnan had accused the young Dane of premeditation.

And Danny had laughed and refused to confirm or deny anything.

And Finns had said that this wasn’t something he did often.

And Danny had replied that this wasn’t something he did, ever.

And Finns had remained silent.

And Danny had answered what Steve could not ask.

‘Because I watched you watching me. And I liked it.’

And Finns had snorted and rolled his eyes and leaned back against the pillow and flung his arm over his face. And slept.

And Danny had smiled. A-honest to god, I’m happy to be here, with you, right here, right now, even though you’re too quiet sometimes, and that scares me, and your eyes are too light, and that sometimes distracts me, and even now, even after all this, I still don’t quite know if you really like me, but still. I’m happy- smile.

THE…END?
 
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 _lothlorien_
 
10:45am 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Emma
I'm terrible at writing comments, but I have to for this one because it's wonderful and you deserve to be drowned in compliments (and chocolate).
 
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 aionaeon
 
11:56pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
You know, the perfect way to die for me would be death by chocolate. And thank you :) I'm so glad you like it. I was a little nervy about this one.
 
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 justams
 
11:04am 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Annie: Xabi lolz
Absolutely wonderful. :D The part about Carra thumping Dagger on the back was hilarious. I could so see him do that. I just loved the whole thing.
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 aionaeon
 
11:57pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Thank you! That's the way I see Carra. The mighty enthusiastic thumper :)
 
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 analysezceci
 
12:01pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
scb: Liverpool
Oh, I love this so much.♥
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 aionaeon
 
11:57pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Thank you :) And your icon is love.
 
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 theellibu
 
12:25pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Ellen: Fagger!love
*happy sigh*

Absolutely lovely. The whole thing with Finns writing on Dan's arm and just writing down what he hears.. so funny and adorable :D

And the last sentence is love. Simple as that. Dan smiling > everything else.

THE…END? Nope, more please ;)
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 aionaeon
 
11:59pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
I just wanted a reason to have Finns write on Danny's forearm. Just think of the muscles and ink and the way it'll move with twisitng sinew. *licks* Oh, did I say that out loud again?

And yes. smileofdan is love. He's like Stevie. His smile sort of breaks across his face and his eyes light up. Love that.
 
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 pralines
 
12:35pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
this is great!
*hails you, queen of danny/finns fic*
 
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 aionaeon
 
12:00am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Haha, thank you! But I'm really not! But thank you :)
 
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 twistedendings
 
01:09pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
come on, sweet catastrophe: Liverpool | | Xabi



Perfection. Really.


Luis being in it this much just made it all the more perfect :p
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 aionaeon
 
12:00am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
I was talking to <lj user="paularinaa'> and we were discussing how much we missed Luis and so...here he is. Thank you! I'm so very glad you enjoyed.
 
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 seythia
 
01:12pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
seythia
That was brilliant...
MORE!!! Please .__.'
 
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 aionaeon
 
12:01am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
You made a strange .___. face. That cracked me up totally :) And thank you! I'm working on duck drabbles...soon.
 
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 rei_schneider
 
01:16pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
★☆★ r e i  苺: fernando
This was great! I love it ♥
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 aionaeon
 
12:01am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Thank you :)
 
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 parallelkites
 
01:31pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Ohhh god, I love it when you write. <3
 
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 aionaeon
 
12:02am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
hahaha thank you muchly. And your nickname rules the world :)
 
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 hoppipolla
 
02:14pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
rusty shackleford
I love how you blame us ahahahahha. It's worth it right?

Stevie and Alonso had smiled, with the captain tugging up the Spaniard's shirt, laughing and saying something about how 'You'll Never Walk Alone' in Basque would look good, just...there. And Alonso had grinned, and had said something too low for anyone else to hear. And Gerrard's face had turned red, and he muttered something about how it was time for everyone to shower and stalked away. Forehead all a-furrowed. I like this. I could see Xabi saying something dirty into Steven's ear.


And Finnan would watch. And Finnan would smile. And Finnan would never quite say anything. Not even when his eyes and Danny’s would meet. And Danny would grin, damp hair sticking up every which way, half plastered to his head. And Finnan would shake his head and turn away. Still smiling.
is there kitten hair in there??

And Danny had continued to complain. And Finnan had continued to defend himself. And the argument had continued over dinner, and then dessert, and then coffee, and then under tossed bedclothes and sweaty sheets and mumbled names, and gasps and moans, and bruises on hips-bones and scratched up shoulder blades, and damp, swollen mouths. This. Just. I needed this this morning. But that is the best image ever.

A-honest to god, I’m happy to be here, with you, right here, right now, even though you’re too quiet sometimes, and that scares me, and your eyes are too light, and that sometimes distracts me, and even now, even after all this, I still don’t quite know if you really like me, but still. I’m happy see that's exactly how I feel about them. That Finns acts like he doesn't like him...or something along those lines.

Sorry for the shitty comment. It's early and I'm distracted by Liverpool.


 
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 aionaeon
 
12:05am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
No no. For some reason having the lines I wrote fed back to me amuses me deeply. hahaha and thank you!

And yes. Stevie/Xabi is a permanent fixture. I mean, they're the old married couple in the group.

And yep. It was subtle mangrykippenhairofdan. Yes. *nods*

I used to be able to write better smut, at least with Naruto characters but with real live human being...I..*blush* But I'm sure I'll get over it *grins*

YES! I can see Finns not quite knowing how to express how he feels to Danny and it comes of as standoffish. I can identify coz that's the way I am in real life. Sometimes it's harder to care but not know how to show you care as opposed to Luis who showers everyone freely with affection :)
 
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 hoppipolla
 
04:45pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
rusty shackleford
And my fic? God it's so hard to write Xabi. I can write Finns fine, get his characterizations down with no problem. Xabi? I have no clue how to write him.
 
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 aionaeon
 
04:51pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Depends on the Xabi you want I think. As you may have noticed, I only write crack!Xabi properly. I did do a semi-serious Xabi once. But that wasn't my best. What problem are you having?
 
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 aionaeon
 
12:06am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Hee. it may or may not have been all part of Agger's grand getfinnsintobed plan. But he's not telling so I can't confirm or deny it categorically for ys :) And thanks! I'm like you liked :)
 
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 paularinaa
 
09:15pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
'And Finnan couldn't quite stop the laugh that emerged. And Danny had turned to look, then immediately ducked his head when he met Finnan's stare.'

DUCK! IT SAYS DUCK! Well, ok, I'm obsessed, so what?

And I love how you blame us. I like it. I like Xabi and how the home and decor magazines found their way into this and that little Stevie/Xabi because they are Stevie and Xabi. And Sami is there and it's kinda what we talked about earlier and yeah, I like it in general. And we won 2-1 and Alvaro scored and Stevie was happy and everyone was happy and I'll just go now. Yes.
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 aionaeon
 
12:08am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. You know what?!!! That was one of the last sentences I inserted once I finished the main bits of this fic and I put it in just so I could say someone 'ducked'!!! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAA. I can't believe you noticed!!!!

And Luis too. I missed Luis mightly after we talked about him so I had to include him also.

And not only did we win 2-1, Arse dropped pointed, Chelsea won and Man U scored an own goal. It's been a perfect weekend. Now all I need is to go grocery shopping later today and I'm set.
 
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 buttercupaisley
 
10:03pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
buttercupaisley
Thank you, thank you, thank you for all your Fagger. ***loves them all***

But this was beautiful with thumping Carra, and inscrutable Luis (god how I miss him), and generous, knowing Sami, and home-dec Xabi. I love fics that capture the dynamic of the team.

And there is quiet, observant Finns watching them all without knowing he's being watched back. I loved watching Daniel through Finns eyes. It's all good and wondrous and I'd bake you a cake if I knew what kind you loved.

Is it alright if I friend you?

 
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 aionaeon
 
12:10am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
ah thank you :) I'm glad I'm able to entertain some one with the voices in my head :)

You know, I didn't think of it that way, as writing the dynamics of the team. But I guess you're right. Hey, what'd know. There was a theme to this great shambolic mess that is random paragraphs thrown together and called drabble.

CHOCOLATE. I LOVE ALL THINGS CHOCOLATE. hahahaha.

And of course it would :)
 
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 alejaboo
 
10:31pm 07/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
alessa
i swear this boy has the most creative methods in alluring people into his bed
 
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 aionaeon
 
12:11am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Doesn't he now? But it may or may not have been his plan you see. And Danny boy's not telling. *grins*
 
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 mildinsomnia
 
02:08am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
This was so great. Even by Dan/Finns standards, where everything is great. I love Dan making Finns write random things in a language he doesn't even know on his arm. And Carra knocking people over with pats on the back. And the part with Sami? (But the fading blue of his eyes hinted he knew what was to come) Freaking aw. And the parts with the little girl and Danny rolling his wrist are just so well put in. Your characterization kills me, for seriol. And... yeah I'll stop now. Basically, ily!
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 aionaeon
 
05:48am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Oh thank you so much! I was a little nervous about this fic coz I really liked it but I didn't know if it was good. It's how I imagine the boys to be...now if only they'll invite me back to the locker room to verify.
 
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 niche
 
03:41am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
one nanometer tall: mary magdalene
kahdlf I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE TEAM DYNAMICS. i think wrt many of the fics i've read, they are all pairing-centric, and there are individual character insights made very clear. but little attention is paid to the dynamics of a team, and how a person watching them all might feel.

finnan is really the perfect observer, and as odd as this may sound i loved the way they bantered and argued more than the actual slash, because </3 i would imagine agger to be immature, sometimes, like that. also, is the incident with the 5 year old true? because i know the incident with dan never being able to keep still is, from all the times i've watched him in the tunnel. &hearts;
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 aionaeon
 
05:52am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Thank you! It means alot coming from you :) I didn't set out to write team dynamics. It just turned out that way. I don't know why really.

And yes, I like conversations and banter. They're so much easier to write than actual, say stories. Plus they allow me to justify the voices in my head.

And nope, the 5 year old girl bit isn't true. But I love the fact you think could be :) Coz I can so picture it happening and it's very much in tune with the image of Danny I have in my deviant brain. And, yes, he always looks edgy in the tunnel. It's love.
 
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 elynaz_sgxa
 
07:20am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I'm so sorry for late in commenting your fics. I've missed them!
Loved this and your teeny tiny little Stevie/Xabi in there.

Love it!
 
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 aionaeon
 
10:04am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
No worries. Thanks for commenting at all. I've not been reading anything much coz work kills :( And hahaha, I haven't been focused on S/X at all lately! Fagger has taken over my brain! *GRINS* I have Fagger-brain.
 
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 sleepy_orange
 
09:04am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
nadz: pic#60415348
am replying to all the fics i missed while my internet server crashed. *kicks singnet*

this is just love! really. and carra! there should be a mandate that everybody should at least mention carra in their fics. he's always ignored!
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 aionaeon
 
09:53am 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
No worries. I'm glad you took the time to review at all. Thank you :)

Carra is love. He's Vice President you know.
 
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 woobie
 
02:02pm 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
specifici-wha?: Sakura
Aww, this was sweet ♥
I think you characterized them really well =)
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 aionaeon
 
01:22pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed :)
 
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 winter_solstice
 
02:06pm 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Winter_Solstice
that is so cute. imagine all of the things Danny can do with his hands! :P
 
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 aionaeon
 
01:23pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
And all the things that can be done to Danny's hands..and his sinewy forearms...and his muscles calves...and his defined thighs...
 
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 dakara_
 
03:31pm 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
VANXIN;: The red 8.
Your characterization. Is superb it's just so real and I can see everything so clearly. And laugh at it, too ♥

I wanna be that 5 year old girl!
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 aionaeon
 
01:07pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
:) Thank you. I'm glad you liked. I think everyone wants to be that 5 year old girl. Yes. *nods*
 
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 leathlin
 
04:24pm 08/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
Camelot's Official Dragon Cuddler: Daaaan!
Oh my,so beautiful!
Everything is just perfect.

And Danny had smiled. A-honest to god, I’m happy to be here, with you, right here, right now, even though you’re too quiet sometimes, and that scares me, and your eyes are too light, and that sometimes distracts me, and even now, even after all this, I still don’t quite know if you really like me, but still. I’m happy- smile.



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 aionaeon
 
01:12pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Danny is just perfect :) So that makes writing him easy. haha. Thank you :)
 
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 toronja
 
02:45am 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
a is for astronaut: dagger
AHEM–
And Danny had smiled. A-honest to god, I’m happy to be here, with you, right here, right now, even though you’re too quiet sometimes, and that scares me, and your eyes are too light, and that sometimes distracts me, and even now, even after all this, I still don’t quite know if you really like me, but still. I’m happy- smile.
. –I love you.
[And, I can't wait to meet the duck. I mean, read the duck story. :)]
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 aionaeon
 
01:24pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
I'm trying to work on the duck drabbles but real life is bothering me to bits! arrrggghhhh!

And thank you *hugs*. I'm so glad you liked.
 
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 strascina
 
08:55am 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
ojalá: i lost my faith in womanhood
I love how this manages to be romantic without being too saccharine sweet. You've decided on your characterization of Daniel and Finns (and the rest of the Liverpool team, come to think) and it's consistent and executed wonderfully all throughout the story. And somehow, I love the idea of Riise and Pennant accosting Agger on account of his tattoos. I adore your Agger and Finnan.
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 aionaeon
 
01:26pm 09/04/2007 (UTC)
 
 
I can wait forever
Oh thank you. I'm really glad you took the time to point out what you liked. Anything that'll help me write better I like.

And Agger always appears so grown up and together I wanted to have the 'kids' of the team accost him just to see his expression. And Luis. Coz other than Xabi, Luis confuses everyone.
 
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